Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Beowulf's Poem

Beowulf daring, dangerous, and defendant of his people
Truly powerfull hunting for his prey
Always noble to his noble people
In the darkness of the dark halls he seeks
Grendel gripping other people
Beowulf becoming badly tempered
When will his grumpy Grendel get to high heroth
Preparing he properly places himself in the hall
Grumpy Grendel on his way there
Smiling silly for his thuoghts of supper
Beowulf also smiling silly for his superb victory
Confidence creeping in both creatures
Grendel grinning uncontrolably
Beowulf bears no loner
Becoming victor will viciously tear them apart

6 comments:

Mundo said...

dude nice poem i agree with chris you snapped good job man

.NiNA. said...

THIS WAS GOOD. GOOD JOB, RENATO!

Paul said...

YOUR FIRST LINE SOUNDED SEXY....LOL....I LIKED IT...SOUNDED REALLY GOOD DUDE...KEEP DOING MORE...PEACE OUT JOE

Alejandro said...

that was nice,nice,nice

Gabriel said...

very nice poem u snapped with that poem, n like paulie says it sounded sexy lol.....GO BEARS

Mayra said...

It was nice and you did snap.